One Word by Shan

I gazed into your eyes
Glazed so beautifully blue
My heart whispered to me
And that's right when I knew
Every moment in time
From past to the present
Each one's been a gift
So everlasting and pleasant
What led me to this
Wasn't a kiss or a hug
It was the end of my search
On my journey for love
I knew as we stood
Watching the moon in the sky
What's always been true
Has one word to describe
Love, in this world
So mystically hidden
Love, as two make
A wordless commitment
Love, what it is
Love, what it isn't
Love imperfections
As they are commitment
I knew when the stars
Lit up my heart and the sky
I know love is true
Between you and I

Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.66) -- Friday, February 23 2007, 08:39 pm

Amazing
Wow!... now that is love in it's truest form. Indeed I love this piece as it has no sexual over-tones only pure and powerful love. I am not even sure what to say, Shan this poem brought a tear to my eyes. Fantastic, I love this poem, you have captured the essence of love perfectly. Great job, please keep writing.

Bipedalguy (4.156.144.137) -- Saturday, February 24 2007, 01:43 am

One of the best.
Your beautiful poetic technique forms such beautiful imagery. It sounds real, and I hope it is.

Shan (65.29.53.244) -- Saturday, February 24 2007, 09:40 am

Ing and Bipedal
thank you ing! i'm glad you felt so strongly with this one.. love's a beautiful thing, and no matter HOW the wording of it comes out.. love can never be painted as perfect as the experience in itself. i'm glad you liked it! thanks for reading! you too bipedal!! and yes ;-) it is real.. love always is :-) thank you's!!

barb (67.58.205.79) -- Sunday, February 25 2007, 07:39 pm

sweet love
This kind of love is nice ,love of the heart ,not lust of a body called love. Love of the heart is a special love. Great special write.

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