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To He Who Loves Only Me
9 December, 2007
Author: Willahh

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You are watching over
me
and as best as I can
see
You want to
be
lead back to the
one who gave
you immorality
I can do what
I am able
to do
as long as you
are committed
to being
honorable mentioned
for nothing is
more true
than the simple fact
that I am so in love with you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Princess Moon (168.53.174.185) -- Saturday, December 8 2007, 09:54 pm

Nice one Willahh

I liked this one, especially the line "for nothing is more true than the simple fact that I am so in love with you"...I loved it. Keep writing, we'll keep reading! ;)
Willahh (170.190.40.78) -- Tuesday, December 11 2007, 08:30 pm

Thank you, Princess Moon

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. That is one of my favorite lines, and I appreciate you telling to keep writing. I do enjoy hearing comments about my work. Thank you, and Merry Christmas.
Mikel K Poet (205.188.116.201) -- Sunday, December 23 2007, 08:33 am

Like it

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