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Ask And You Shall Receive: 5 Poems
Author: Colin Stewart

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The effect of this jungle music is easy to see.
They swing so erratically from tree to tree
and their proclivity substantiates all primal fears
with the agitation of listening to Britney Spears!

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So silly was the season it was profound.
So profound were the silly when they're around.
So harmonious was this template it's silly to think
that the profundity of their communion is so hard to sink!

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The message is so important in this day and age
that mythology has started to show its age
and if the Gods of Greece have committed one sin
then without technology they are not plugged in!

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Once the facts are established he carefully speaks.
It's the backbone of truth that time honors and seeks
but this equation of destiny only becomes clear
if another wise man takes the time to hear!

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With his spirit of integrity he is willing to defend
that a man should embrace humility and be able to send
this nurturing message to do what you can
in order to mend your fellow man!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ms Poem (187.42.122.110) -- Thursday, September 10 2009, 09:41 pm

i asked...

and i received:you wrote more one incredible poem.Life wouldn't be the same without your poems, without you to look into the veil of reality and make me think about so many things.
Laraine Smith (209.132.169.110) -- Sunday, September 13 2009, 07:43 pm

Beautiful!

I love the final stanza!
 
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