When All
Author: Shan


It's a tough night
But I put up a tough fight,
It's enough to make it alright,
I take it with stride,
All bull set aside,
I just wanna cry,
Maybe tomorrow
The sorrow will fade,
I'll swallow the knife,
Handle to blade,
Today I follow my hearts bleeding drops
Til maybe tomorrow
When all the pain stops


Comments on this poem/writing:

mental ( -- Tuesday, June 14 2011, 10:56 pm

i like

i hope the pain does stop for you.
i've been where you been and still go there.
sometimes it helps me to write.
sometimes it get in the way
but to me it's a gift.
good wtite
Shan ( -- Monday, June 20 2011, 07:54 pm

Thank you

Thank you mental.. Sometimes writing it seems like all I know how to do for sure.. Delicately helps with pain
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