Where I Let Go
Author: Shan


I'm internally shattered
Eternally bruised
Concerning the matter
that's loosened the screws
I'm loosing my mind
Blind at the side
I kind of feel like I'm dying inside
I'm winding along
each line in this song
Trying to find a way to move on
I stay on my toes
so nobody knows
at any moment my sanity blows
I frantically panic
And seem manic to most
In the depths of the dark
Is where I let it go


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri ( -- Wednesday, July 13 2011, 05:55 pm

can empathize

Depression is something. I asked one of my cousins not too long ago if he was happy. Happiness seems to come and go today. I know life is only what we make of it, but it is easy to sink into a hole.

Feeling you on this one. Like I'm trying to, fight the good fight of faith.

Hang in there Shan! If I'm still making it, then certainly you can continue to make it too.
Shan ( -- Saturday, July 16 2011, 04:10 pm

Thanks meri

Definitely continue to fight the good fight.. It'll all fade...
taylor james ( -- Friday, July 22 2011, 12:11 am


i know this feeling all to well, infact this was me. and to a certain extent with me it still comes and goes. stay strong and try to think positive. fight the good fight shan! amazing poem
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