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Sin
Author: Mark Spencer

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Iím what dwells in your subconscious.
I am your puppeteer.
I have subjugated planets,
With envy, greed, and fear.

I master every soul I touch,
So virtue will not win.
Iím the consequence of knowledge.
The sickness known as SIN.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie * (98.224.73.21) -- Monday, October 10 2011, 07:59 pm

Magnificently Profound !

a deep Piece you mastered here Mark, I confess..
SIN has rooted itself in me lately..Can not seem to shake it.. a residue from a source that has... well should I say... managed to get the better of me....gets my heart to race..and tears to dispense.what a battle..you composed this true to its color..God Bless, Terrie
Thia (205.142.112.53) -- Friday, November 4 2011, 02:05 pm

WOW!!

That's what I said outloud after reading this one. Short but very powerful. It speaks to and about everyone. Love it! Thank you Mark
barb (66.103.62.153) -- Saturday, November 5 2011, 03:06 pm

great write

I like this it was straight to the point,no pussy footing around.
 
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