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It's All About
Author: Shan

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I leave it unnoticed
But I perceive it uncoated
I see where you're going
There's no need for motive
Just proceed with your greed
And when you wake up and notice
Don't be coming to me
Just remember I wrote it
You see, I'm already loaded
I'm as green as can be
This ain't sugar coated
I've got all that I'll need
It's right here and noted
Grown straight from the seed
How long till you notice
Your apple fell far from the tree
Hope you see why I wrote this
It's all about family

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri (98.166.155.205) -- Tuesday, December 30 2014, 12:37 am

Shan!

I may not comment on every poem I read, but yours is among those I read often. Sounds like a money hungry person in the immediate family? Did I interpret wrong?

Hope you had a good Christmas! Happy New Year!
Shan (24.147.56.85) -- Tuesday, December 30 2014, 01:55 pm

:-) Thanks Meri!

More than the money hungry, just speaking on greed in general. My Christmas was great, thank you! I hope yours was too!! HaPpy almost new year!!!
 
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