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Merciful Disillusion
20 March, 2004
Author: Eryemil

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Just one more day,
By your side,
It worth the pain
The future awaits me

My fate draws near,
But in your arms,
Fate has no power,
I am strong by your side.

Saying goodbye,
My life will have no meaning,
Once those words are said,
Make me believe I’ll see you again,
And I’ll keep fighting.

Cataclysms crush my body,
Must go on,
Ignore then pain,
Oh my love it hurts to think,
But the fear of being without you,
Drives me further.

Go ahead world,
Punish me,
Me against humanity,
How hard can it be,
When I have him.

My tortured soul,
cries to the heavens,
My life ends,
Whispers of glory,
Bitters tears bathe my bareness,
After all the fighting,
My hopes for us,
It is the end,
And I stand alone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.195) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 07:57 pm

In this lifetime.........

Hey LE! (Lady Eryemil) Nice personification and alliteration you got going on in your poem!
Meridian (64.12.116.195) -- Tuesday, March 23 2004, 07:58 pm

yep

Life does seem like that sometimes........but don't lose your hopes and keep dreaming!
Angie (68.53.188.176) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 08:47 am

*_*

wow.. yea, that's how life ends up a lot of times and great desriptions again..
 
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