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Lost In Pride
Author: Eryemil

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You are the light,
That hunts my night,
Keeps me awake,
Wonít let me rest.

Wanted to fly,
Yet there is no sky,
Ashes that still flake,
I mourn their silent quest.

with one last sigh,
I feel myself die,
Drown the forlorn lake,
Marked with Deathís dark crest.

Enough tears to cry,
Lack the strength to try,
I feel my heart ache,
Pain my real test.

And around it goes,
Around it comes,
Itís my time to suffer,
Ha! At the end I still win.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.136) -- Saturday, March 20 2004, 02:17 pm

Robert Frost

Enjoyed reading your poem about reflection! In a way, this rhyming reminds me of the late poet, Robert Frost! His poems were good and vivid! Lady Eryemil, I hope you aren't really taking death into consideration.
Lady Eryemil (205.188.116.20) -- Sunday, March 21 2004, 04:56 am

O_o

I've read some of his work, I like very much actually.
This poem is more about triumph and rebirth than it is about death, even though it does mention myself dying it has a deeper meaning. It's pretty funny that I was getting on some kids case about his poem because it was one of those " I shall kill myself because I want attention" poems, and now you come asking me if I was suicidal. I think I was a Little rough on him... I hate Karma. ^_^
 
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