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Allow Me To Love You
Author: Eryemil

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Allow me to adore you, my dearest
Please, let me please you,
Allow me to love you, my love,
Allow me to need you.

Let me hide in your shadow,
Until you want my pleasure,
Let me live off your warmth,
Which I deeply treasure.

Allow me to dream,
Of your star-bright eyes,
Of your heavenly body,
As I sleep at night.

From my heartfelt pursuit,
Allow me no rest,
Since your earnest approval,
Is my only quest.

Allow me to feel,
To subsist hardly whole,
Donít laugh at my passion
Donít ignore my woe.

Though I sin for loving,
I sin without shame,
Allow me to live,
Though eternally in pain.

For I can never have you,
I exist ever-tortured,
Your smile, my beacon,
For it shapes my fortune.

They have slept in your arms,
Walked through your heartís door,
Yet your love is a leisure,
That I cannot afford.

I just canít go on,
Knowing itĎs hopeless,
Your lips just canĎt hearten,
Instead leave me lifeless.

You will never know me,
As I fervently wish,
Allow me one favour,
My first and last kiss

Why them and not me,
Iíve asked broken hearted,
You to busy lusting,
Never knew I parted

Now I leave this harsh world,
In hopes that I may,
In some other life,
Your longed for love gain.

You donít need my love,
Allow my departure,
Cut the ties that bind me,
Free the heart you captured.

My only one hope,
Is that by my deed,
Youíll be free to relish,
And love without heed.

Even if Iíll never,
Your affection own,
Iíll be ready to hold you,
When you canít go on.

Iíll be your guardian angel,
My spirit your home,
Iíd give my life for you,
But IĎm already gone.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Princess Moon (206.216.220.55) -- Wednesday, January 21 2004, 11:29 pm

HOW BEEEEEEEAUUUUUUTIIIIIIIIIIFULLLL!

This poem was too much to take in depth, which is absolutely a good thing! I loved every stanza, every line, every word! It was totally awesome from beginning to end, how ever did you come up with such beautiful lyrics! BRAVO!BRAVO! You are indeed a poet!
Lady Eryemil (152.163.252.195) -- Friday, January 23 2004, 09:51 pm

^_^

Thank you for your kind words Princess Moon
Angie (4.35.131.180) -- Saturday, February 21 2004, 06:06 pm

awww

I love the depth in it, but I can see where it came from:)
Lady Eryemil (205.188.116.76) -- Monday, March 22 2004, 02:03 am

*.*

Aww I'ma cry, you guys are awesome...

^_^
Mel (198.240.128.75) -- Monday, March 6 2006, 07:28 pm

Wow!

That was truly amazing. Absolutely beautiful!
 
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