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The Photograph
16 January, 2003
Author: Mark Spencer

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Here I sit, with a broken heart,
my tears still haven't dried.
I gaze upon the photograph
of someone else’s bride.

Once her heart belonged to me,
a gift I held so dear.
But she'll be in his arms tonight,
and so I shed a tear.

If I had it to do over,
she would be my bride.
I wouldn't drive my love away
to save my stubborn pride.

She meant everything to me.
She taught me how to laugh.
And so my tears will fall tonight,
upon her photograph.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Marci (204.248.60.10) -- Monday, February 3 2003, 04:17 pm

This is good :o)

Very sweet poem......
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, February 5 2003, 11:57 pm


A beautiful poem, with a lot of deep emotional thoughts
Shelly (199.216.176.5) -- Thursday, February 6 2003, 08:30 pm

Spellbounded

That was an amazing poem. Sad but very sentimental. Keep writting dude!
Lori Ann Day (198.81.26.134) -- Saturday, February 22 2003, 12:36 am


When we are going through something, sometimes, we do not understand for the longest time why we behaved certain ways, and why fate turned out to be so cruel, but in the long run the answers are often kinder than the past, and reveal to us the reasons why if we have patience.
lisa lepack (64.230.49.33) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 11:48 pm

love the poem so much that.......

this is a great poem. i would love to make this poem into a song . it has such good meaning and expresions and well. i would have to ask you if i could make this poem into a song.with your permission i would love to make this poem into a song and add it to my firstcd iwill make. and when i do finish my cd i would be more then honored to have your name with mine along with it. and when the cd is finished i would be more then honored to send you a copy of my first cd.my email is (snip - security) please comment on my suggestion.it would make one great country song
Mark Spencer (205.188.209.8) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 11:56 pm

To Lisa

Thanks Marci, Capricorn, Shelly, Lori Ann and Lisa. Lisa did you receive the e-mail I sent you in response to your query? Let me know.

Mark
Martin Vann (67.30.70.176) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 05:04 pm

Just the usual excellent work by Mark Spencer, Lovely, Poem.

Mark,

You always tell us something in such a way that we feel what you feel and on, and on. Everything has a clear message, you intimidate us with our own fears and show us the way out, you provide light where we have darkness and on and on.

To Lisa, I agree with you, actually, most of Mark's work could be put to music, I have heard his words in my heart many times. Good luck on your effort. Also, you might visit the musical thoughts category in this site, its on the front page. You will be impressed, I think.

Thanks Mark,
MartinV
 
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