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Are My Feelings Yours?
Author: Brett

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Every day I ponder what you are thinking
So that our thoughts can somehow be connecting...
For it is impossible to speak my mind
I therefore have to keep everything inside...
And I know you say I have nothing to fear
But infact I fear the things that make you unaware...
Of how strong my feelings really are for you
And how I love the way you talk, walk, everything you do...
I tried to keep the feelings away from your eyes
But they're almost too obvious by now to hide...
So I'll pretend that this poem isn't real
And that you really don't know just how I feel...
Because it scares me not knowing what your feelings are
And i can only hope that they are somewhat similar...
Because expressing myself puts my heart on the line
So i can only hope your feelings are close to mine...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.113.39) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 05:49 pm

That feeling

Hey Brett! How are you doing? I know exactly what you're talking about! Afraid of being rejected, wanting desperately to know if she feels the same as you when it comes to love!

Nice work!!

Meridian
Clive (63.184.96.60, 2) -- Friday, April 2 2004, 05:58 pm

Good Choice of words

Been down that road fearing rejection manytimes, guess thats why I write the way I do.
Good job in your writing
Brett (205.214.208.141) -- Saturday, April 3 2004, 02:14 am

Thank you

Thank you for your comments. I feel really relieved knowing that people have similar thoughts to mine and understand what I am writing about. So thank you very much for posting you thoughts.
 
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