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I'm Not Your Fool
Author: Megan

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He couldn't care less
I couldn't care more
He left me a mess
Here I am crying on my bedroom floor

Why do you have to break my heart
make me cry
rip this love apart
and then have questions on the good-bye

Why do you pretend this doesn't hurt
It hurts you too, deep in your soul
I'm not just another flirt
and I'm not your fool

So this is good-bye
Cause I'm sick of this game
I'm moving on with each tear that I cry
There's no shame

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 07:15 pm

wow...

Great poem! I am surprised you could put so much soul into this poem and have it so short. Great Poem! I loved it!
thanks Leah (152.163.252.97) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 10:37 pm

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Thanks Leah , your comment put a smile on my face :-)
Molly (208.16.69.125) -- Tuesday, October 28 2003, 12:35 am

GREAT POEM

O M G THAT WAS A GREAT POEM.It describes everything that im going through !!!
martin Vann (171.75.221.95) -- Tuesday, October 28 2003, 08:30 pm

You have the correct attitude...,

Megan,

Now, just pick yourself up, off your bed-room floor, walk out the door, warm sunshine is waiting for you, and if, you feel a lesson has been learned, your new walk in the sunshine, will not cause a burn.

Meg,
I know it hurts, the pain will go but, only if, you move on.

Very good work!
MartinV
Gemma_13 (86.1.148.240) -- Sunday, October 30 2005, 07:33 pm

i know how it feels 2 b a fool

i was a fool too once upon a time but sometimes i still feel like his fool
anjelica (58.169.97.92) -- Friday, January 26 2007, 03:58 am

your no fool

that is one poem well written, short and to the point, love is something that we cannot make happen, its like striking gold, when you do you will never look back, until then you can only rely on your inner faith, and believe in yourself, because until you love YOU, no one else is capable!
 
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