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Miss You So Much
10 November, 2003
Author: Shan

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Kk baby, I miss your sweet words
I miss your pretty little face
I miss you so much it hurts
Without you, I'm a disgrace

Joyce yo, I think about you everyday
I miss the times we've had together
Noone could take my love for you away
In my heart, we're with each other forever

Jim, you've hurt me bad
You've torn my world apart
Beaten, scarred and made me mad
But I really miss you in my heart

Mom, I miss you most of all
Don't know where to go since you've gone
I still need you to pick me up when I fall
Still need to be taught right from wrong
Since you've passed, I feel so small
It all happend so fast
Sometimes I try to believe
That your not gone at all
But I know you had to leave
And for you, I will stand tall
Your sweet smell
Your motherly touch
No words could ever tell
Just how badly I miss you so much

------- Author's Notes -------

*~*R I P-03*~*
I know you are watching, and by my side, but I'd give my life if I could tell you I loved you just one more time

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.122.249.168) -- Tuesday, November 11 2003, 10:22 pm

Beautiful and touching, Shan....

This is beautiful and touching, Shan! I really relate to it. I am another who has lost his Mom, and you never stop missing Mom! I think I can safely say this writing is something your Mom would be very proud of. This comes from a Dad who has kids who write, too. Very good job, Shan! VERY good job! Thanks!
***Ben
shan (64.12.96.166) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 01:02 am

thank you

thank you ben.. i can only hope she can see what i write now, and just how much i love and miss her
 
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