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Communication Breaking
4 September, 2003
Author: Shan

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You obviously didn't want it to last
To much of a task for you to come to me
And ask if we were moving to fast
Don't get me wrong I had a blast
But listen to the facts, wrong side of the tracks
Now it's to late for you to ask, never taking you back
So listen to that and stop harrassing me
I gave you back your key, maybe someday you'll see
Just how great it could be, but it's to late
I'll never wait, I found my fate, and at this rate
I'm on cloud nine for all time
You kept a line with no sign
Of communication, got sick of waistin
Sick of facin all the nothin you gave
No notion of things you wanted to say
Only got a taste of games you wanted to play
So when you ask why I didn't stay
Think over all the things I say to you
I was declared to you, there for you
Cared for you, picked you up when you were feeling blue
But for you this wasn't true, and that's why I'm leaving you
It's all the things you didn't do to make us pull through
You never delayed to the fact when getting layed in the sack
Things started to fade back when you didn't get your way
Don't mean to put you on the spot, but the way I was taught
I thought words meant more then having sex a lot
And that's why we always faught
I've brought that up to you a million times and never a reply
And when I ask why, all you did was sigh, and give a little lie
Well baby, I'm sorry, but I aint going to cry, I've moved on with my life
I'm saying goodbye, I will always be a friend
Love for you I'll always send
But for us being together, baby, This is the end

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Comments on this poem/writing:

cutty (68.10.73.133) -- Friday, November 3 2006, 10:25 pm

please

can i use your peom please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
atene (205.161.14.73) -- Thursday, February 15 2007, 07:51 am

please

please sir can i use your poem
mia (203.87.192.130) -- Monday, December 3 2007, 12:16 pm

itz beautiful

can i use it...please
shan (72.222.199.132) -- Monday, December 3 2007, 03:51 pm

mia

hey mia.. just wonderin, what would you use it for? glad you liked it :-)
jackie (4.30.208.190) -- Friday, February 7 2014, 04:45 am

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may i use ur poem pls...
 
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