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Who Am I
Author: Shan

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Drifting in and out of my self
Scratching myself down to the bone
Wondering if my mind will ever
Reach a place I can finally call home
Starring into my own reflection
Starring down all the thoughts in mind
Searching deep within myself
Disapointment is all I find
Tangled up in thoughts of death
Wrapped around the mind I used to own
Trying to make my brain process
Trying to attempting to regain control
Looking at the site of myself
Wondering if I am really what I see
Searching through the thoughts in mind
Wondering if people are really seeing me
I'm not quite sure if I'm visible to the world
Not quite sure of anything anymore
Not quite sure I really see myself
So why would people see anything but a bore
So I sit and stratch, wonder and search
Trying just to figure myself out
I attempt, I untangle, I look, I burst
Trying to make myself come about

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KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Sunday, August 17 2003, 03:06 am

Good

Good, your poem was very fresh and original...I liked it a lot...Good job Shan!
 
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