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Questions Of Myself
Author: Shan

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How do you get inside yourself and let the trapped go
How do you justify yourself and stop feeling so low
How do you get yourself to open up and be the person you want to be
How do you get people to see YOU, instead of just what I might seem

Why can't I get through this on my own
Why do I force myself to be all alone
Why can't I ask for help from the people I trust most
Why do I give up after I've gotten so far, so close

What does it mean when nothing feels real
What does it mean when everythings surreal
What will it take to make this go away, dissapear
What will it take to get rid of the pain, the tear

Where will this depression lead me
Where will I end up at the end to be
Where is there help and how can I ask
Where is my friend, myself-- in this task

Where will I be 20 years from now
How can I push myself through
What exactly will this life allow
Why can't I ask for your help.. I need you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Nicole(Katie) (66.167.215.171) -- Thursday, May 29 2003, 07:53 pm

I really really like your poem

Hey, I really really really really really like your poem. It said somethings that iv been trying to say or just inside. Keep it up:) ~katie
Lost (24.147.243.252) -- Wednesday, June 25 2003, 03:30 pm

Beautiful Written!

Beautiful Written. My feelings often reflect your thoughts penned here.
Natasha (66.94.199.46) -- Saturday, January 3 2004, 05:47 am

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You have a wanderful talent keep it up and one day you will make it to the top with ur poetry I really loved ur poem
Briana and SUzy (64.12.116.197) -- Thursday, July 14 2005, 01:46 am

LUVED IT!!!!

hey dude i luv the poem!!!
 
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