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Do I Trust Me?
Author: SweetVenom

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When things take a tough course,
And I have no one to share it about,
Still taking failures as stepping stones,
But yet another one may crush my bones.
Do I trust me?

I look at the world with fear starved eyes,
Boggling for taking risks in life,
I don't know where to start,
And I am really concerned on where I will end.
Do I trust me?

I have some spirit left in me,
To fire my saddened wet heart,
But the driving force,
Has left me numb and makes me feel,
Like a dumb.
Do I trust me?

With this thought in my brain,
My future looks very mean,
Some one should boost in hopes,
So that I feel,"I have some scope",
for putting an end to this depression.
Do I trust me?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Newage Caveman (207.41.226.35) -- Monday, April 12 2004, 01:01 pm

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good one mite.dunna worry 'bout the future.life's rewards are not for the strongest,but for people who persevere buddy.keep up the good work..
Sweetvenom (61.1.202.169) -- Saturday, April 17 2004, 06:43 pm

Newage Caveman

Thanks a lot Newage Caveman. I was terribly down at that time and this was my vent.Thanks for your comments.
chandana (219.64.185.177) -- Wednesday, April 12 2006, 01:08 pm

good one

hey there! that is a beautiful verse you've composed. and its so wonderful to see people questioning their own trust. its the beginning of a quest for self realization. way to go!
Rajesh.K (10.171.2.119) -- Tuesday, May 30 2006, 03:19 pm

Good one da!

Hi da, Never knew you were so good at writing poems.... really i enjoyed this one.... good work, keep it up and pls continue.....

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