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I Wish I Had Told Her
Author: SweetVenom

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I wish I had told her,
that I was in love with her,
And atleast known about my chance;
Instead of nailing a hole with a punch,
deep into my fragile heart,
and breaking it into many parts.

I wish I had told her,
that we both will make a lovely couple,
even if she was to make a big scorn,
I would have atleast known her mind,
so that I would have used something to bind,
two of us together; in the game of love.
I would have definitely, had time to sow,
the seeds of love and watered it well,
and fathered it to see it grow well.

I wish I had told her,
that I wouldn't mind if she leaves,
but she should give reasons in brief,
so that it would once again give me another chance,
to make up for my mischance.

I wish I had told her,
that I wished to kiss her,
and make love to her.
As I cared a lot about her,
I couldn't hold to see her cry,
that beautiful eyes, that always pry on me;
looks awkward when she weeps.
I always want to keep her near,
and I could never think of a life without her,
being near.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sweetvenom (61.1.202.129) -- Friday, January 16 2004, 05:43 am

Comment pls

Dear guys,PLs comment on this poem.sweetvenom
Lady Eryemil (64.12.96.171) -- Sunday, January 18 2004, 04:18 pm

^_^

The fear of telling someone that you love them, it's comical how we sometimes prefe to keep it inside rather than face possible rejection
Sweetvenom (61.1.200.1) -- Monday, January 19 2004, 04:53 am

Lady Eryemil

Its really true Eryemil,We love them so much that the fear of rejection supersedes everything.
Ashvita (164.164.8.240) -- Thursday, July 8 2004, 12:15 pm

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WHO IS SHE??????????
Alexandria (68.226.186.80) -- Saturday, April 30 2005, 06:38 pm

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Who is this mysterious woman you write about? What amazes me is you tell people through poetry how you feel and sometimes.....i bet....they dont even know it.
Terrie* (65.150.170.10) -- Saturday, April 30 2005, 07:05 pm

SweetVenom,,

if it is a read it is a great powerful one full of sincere emotions..if it is about a love in your life.i would have to say ,what is most fearful, is never sharin' your true honest inner feelings, chances are you could both be there with the same thoughts and no one shares.take a risk,ya already know that it feels good, so ya know the outcome gots to be even better. love is on your hearts side, never go on in live not tellin' someone how much you care, we may never get that chance again.as they say "you Snooze you lose" don't hand her over to someone else.and never let romance slip away! love is a powerful emotion. Good Luck Sweet
Sweetvenom (203.91.193.4) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 04:06 pm

Thanks Terrie* & Alexandria

Thanks for your comments & Terrie* your 'adivce' is def taken without any words.Let me come to the real world and face HER.:) But soon, I will do it. The more time I take, the more I lose. Thanks once again for your comments, advice & friendly hugs.
 
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