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Is This The End Of Love?
Author: SweetVenom

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I really tried hard to get close,
But she wouldn't budge,
she didn't even speak to me,
nor did she give me a chance.
Is this the end of my love?

She didn't give me any reason,
But I desperately expect one;
She may not like me,
But I still want her to say,
"I don't want you".
Is this the end of my love?

I want to hear her outburst,
take her in my arms,
cuddle and pacify her, provided,
she gives me a chance;
and tell me where I went wrong.

I wouldn't have been perfect,
Nor would have been 'she';
But she could have told me,
the reason for the displeasure.
Is this the end of my love?

I have waited enough,
I have strived hard,
to join the bond;
But with her obstinacy,
I had to bow low.
Is this the end of my love?

Do I need to demand a justification,
for this stupid act of avoidance?
Do I need to confront her,
and ask for an explanation?
Do I have any chance of fixing this bond?
Is this the end of my love?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

sweetvenom (61.1.202.129) -- Friday, January 16 2004, 05:44 am

comment pls

dear guys, pls comment on this poem.Sweetvenom
Tarna (66.72.30.139) -- Friday, January 16 2004, 06:13 am

pls comment

Tacky to ask for comment on your own work. If someeone wants to comment there is opportunity without being asked.

As for your poem. I have felt this way before. It is hard to deal with ending a relationship that seems to have no closure. Tears you apart inside with the what did I do that was so bad.. Could it also be nothing, that maybe it was just them....unable to return your love so true..
Lady Eryemil (64.12.96.139) -- Sunday, January 18 2004, 04:55 pm

^_^

She might have denied you the love you wanted, but that's hardly the end of love, it goes on, and so should you. (My advise if the poem it's about your own feelings)
Sweetvenom (61.1.200.1) -- Monday, January 19 2004, 04:56 am

Lady Eryemil

Thnax a lot for your advise.
leah g (66.222.217.200) -- Wednesday, January 21 2004, 06:44 am

I love your work

Sweetvenom I don't think its tacky at all to want some honest opinions on your amazing poems. Truthfully I really like your poems, they really speak to my heart and I don't think that a poem has ever done that for me. Please continue writing....
sweetvenom (61.2.224.27) -- Thursday, January 22 2004, 02:06 am

leah g thanx

I really wanted to know how ppl take my feelings.I have never asked anyone their opinions for other poems but for these 2,cause when I wrote them, I really felt the same kind of feeling.Thanx a lot pal.
 
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