Don't Ever Lose Hope
Don't lose hope,the world is yours
When the sun blows all its heat down on you,
and tries to dry you to death,
Stand up like a creeper,
struggling hard to be the winner.
You may find lot of foliage strewn,
If you lose hope, you will also be pruned.
And face Him with all your might,
Don't lose hope, this is what is right.
When the rain lashes all its water on you,
and floods you till your neck,
when you need to stand on your toes to grasp for breath,
Change into a fish;
and take the most difficult trek.
On the way, you may find lot of wreck,
Don't lose hope, you are on right track.
When breeze turns into storm,
when even the heaviest object is heaved;
and you may be just a feather,
thrown away a lot farther,
But still,the wind can't hurt you,
Just sit tight,while it takes you for a round.
Don't lose hope,just try to re-bound.
When the ground you stand on, caves in,
Try to be the smallest of the ants,
and hold on to atleast a grain of mud
and save yourself, for that particular instant.
That could make you stay against the vibration,
But still,Don't lose hope,you are on the right trail.
When the heart has lost the interest to live,
when the mind makes you feel very humiliated,
when people near you take you for a scrap,
Just hang on and prove your worthiness.
Just don't lose hope,you are soon to be famous.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|sakthi (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, January 13 2004, 06:05 pm|
its boosting up the spirit of life
|Terrie* (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, January 13 2004, 08:22 pm|
absolutely remarkable..you are an amazing writer...so full of inspiration.. (Sakthi said it all..in 8 precious words) Enjoy your day!!!Terrie*
|Arun (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, January 26 2004, 04:05 am|
FAntastic poem. Your style sure is improving an maturing.
|Mucahit Şahin From Turkey (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, March 3 2004, 07:43 pm|
i can say all they are very good poems. go on writing. i ll advise this site to all of my friends
|CB (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, March 4 2004, 12:12 pm|
Loads of talent.work on it.
|Meridian (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, March 9 2004, 09:35 pm|
I would definitely recommend myself and others who might have lost hope as well to take heed to this poem. I am truly speechless; I admire this poem so much SV!
|SweetVenom (126.96.36.199) -- Saturday, March 13 2004, 02:57 pm|
If this poem does something and brings up your confidence, I am really happy.Thanx a lot for your comments and also letting me know on the effect this poem had on you.Infact , I wrote this when I was terribly down.I consoled myself with my words :).Once again thanx a lot.
|vidya (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, April 15 2005, 10:38 am|
really good and inspiring poem--your style of expression is good
|Divya (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 02:46 pm|
|barb (220.127.116.11) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 08:27 pm|
A very true statement. When down we have to look up. Good write.
|Catyrose (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, February 1 2007, 10:48 pm|
this poem popped up after quite some time. It was exactly the "pick me up" I needed to ease me thru a sort of down in the dumps time I am going thru. Thanks for sharing!!!
|Sweetvenom (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, February 6 2007, 04:24 pm|
I read this now and then whenever I feel down. If this could do something to ease you guys, I'm happy for it :-)
Thanks Divya,Barb & Catyrose!
|Deepak (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, January 9 2009, 09:01 am|
I Know Sweet Venom for alomst a year now, I had no clue that he was so talented..... amazing poem pal.... keep it up.
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