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I Shall Wait
Author: SweetVenom

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We once had a great time together,
But suddenly she went out of my hold,
No good-byes were said,
No hard words exchanged.
But I shall wait for her.

I could only sense the hatred,
she had for me;
No phone calls,
No return calls for my missed calls.
But still I shall wait.

She had once promised,
She would never leave me,
But as the old saying goes,
"Promises are made,to be broken"
It really did break my heart.
But still I shall wait.

I dont know what's the real problem,
But I could clearly guess
that she shuns me;
But still I shall wait.

I still cry for her,
Hope she hears my yowls;
As I like to give her a chance,
to be with a good man,I shall wait.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Arun (61.11.73.4) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 02:00 am

Great going

Atlast out dear Sweetvenom has got the fame and recognition he needs and deserves. Good going Giri, and keep up the good work.
Terrie* (65.148.211.207) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 03:59 am

nice work...

excellent ..alot of sincere feelings from the heart was put into this...
premlatha (203.199.199.49) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 10:11 am

no title

superb
Raj (61.1.200.185) -- Monday, October 20 2003, 05:40 pm

Real Feel for THE Girl

Good Work and lots of imaginations into ur work..., Keep going ... would expect more n more like this......
smiriti (203.145.187.181) -- Monday, October 20 2003, 06:29 pm

xcellent

this poem reveals the lost of a beloved one which is painful.u shall wait and hope she will come .......hey good luck for yr future
sakthi (61.1.207.135) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 05:45 pm

fantastic

its like an visualisation of ur feeling,how cud u bring out the real feeling entirely into ur words...hats up ..keep going...all the best .my prayers will ever remain for u
myongchong (217.226.122.136) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 11:07 am

huhu

yes good.
Rajaraman (61.11.104.97) -- Saturday, November 1 2003, 04:58 pm

nice and simple

A real good one with real good feelings in it.And for whom u r waiting?plz reveal that soon yaar.
Deepa.S (61.11.79.139) -- Sunday, November 16 2003, 04:58 pm

keep goin'

excellent
Amrita (61.95.203.13) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 10:23 am

good

u always follow tht watever u have written in ur rhyme.someone wrote its ur imagination but it just like a real feelings.
 
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