I Shall Wait
17 October, 2003
Author: SweetVenom
We once had a great time together,
But suddenly she went out of my hold,
No good-byes were said,
No hard words exchanged.
But I shall wait for her.
I could only sense the hatred,
she had for me;
No phone calls,
No return calls for my missed calls.
But still I shall wait.
She had once promised,
She would never leave me,
But as the old saying goes,
"Promises are made,to be broken"
It really did break my heart.
But still I shall wait.
I dont know what's the real problem,
But I could clearly guess
that she shuns me;
But still I shall wait.
I still cry for her,
Hope she hears my yowls;
As I like to give her a chance,
to be with a good man,I shall wait.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Arun (61.11.73.4) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 03:00 am Atlast out dear Sweetvenom has got the fame and recognition he needs and deserves. Good going Giri, and keep up the good work. |
| Terrie* (65.148.211.207) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 04:59 am excellent ..alot of sincere feelings from the heart was put into this... |
| premlatha (203.199.199.49) -- Saturday, October 18 2003, 11:11 am superb |
| Raj (61.1.200.185) -- Monday, October 20 2003, 06:40 pm Good Work and lots of imaginations into ur work..., Keep going ... would expect more n more like this...... |
| smiriti (203.145.187.181) -- Monday, October 20 2003, 07:29 pm this poem reveals the lost of a beloved one which is painful.u shall wait and hope she will come .......hey good luck for yr future |
| sakthi (61.1.207.135) -- Tuesday, October 21 2003, 06:45 pm its like an visualisation of ur feeling,how cud u bring out the real feeling entirely into ur words...hats up ..keep going...all the best .my prayers will ever remain for u |
| myongchong (217.226.122.136) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 12:07 pm yes good. |
| Rajaraman (61.11.104.97) -- Saturday, November 1 2003, 05:58 pm A real good one with real good feelings in it.And for whom u r waiting?plz reveal that soon yaar. |
| Deepa.S (61.11.79.139) -- Sunday, November 16 2003, 05:58 pm excellent |
| Amrita (61.95.203.13) -- Monday, April 11 2005, 11:23 am u always follow tht watever u have written in ur rhyme.someone wrote its ur imagination but it just like a real feelings. |
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