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I Long For The Day
Author: Brett

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Saying how I feel is never easy to do,
Especially when it's feelings for someone like you...
I know you better than any of the rest,
But you still seem to like being my friend best...
If only you could start to see or realise,
My true feelings and emotions that I often keep inside...
We could be perfect if you would just give me a chance,
But you would still deny me when I asked for a dance...
I've never quited before and I won't start now,
So I'm letting you know that I'll make you mine somehow...
If it takes days, months or years I don't care,
You'll give you one chance is all I want to hear...
Because I'd give it all up just to make it last,
It will last forever there's no chance of it ending fast...
I know this now because these feelings a rare,
Something you hardly find throughout your years...
So until the day that we are joined in hearts,
I'll let you believe that we will end up apart.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.137) -- Saturday, April 17 2004, 03:31 pm

The Day will Come......

Hey Brett! Ah, the feeling of love! So pure, so sweet, so right! Good poem on "I Long For The Day"! I enjoyed all 18 lines........The day will come Brett; I can feel it!! Good poem again Brett!

Meridian
GEMMA (81.97.143.34) -- Monday, April 19 2004, 07:57 pm

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that feeling i know well i waited a long time for my day and were still together now IT WILL COME EVENTUALLY even though now it seems forever waiting now GOOD LUCK !!!!
Brett (205.214.208.67) -- Tuesday, April 20 2004, 12:28 am

Thanks Guys

Thanks yet again for posting your great comments. I can't say much more than thank you so much!
Brett (205.214.208.67) -- Tuesday, April 20 2004, 12:34 am

Little Mistake

And also, I made a little typing error. The "You'll" in line 12 is meant to be "I'll". So my appologies.
Emilee (12.223.196.102) -- Tuesday, April 20 2004, 01:04 am

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great poem...i can relate, dont stress, the day will come! o, and dont worry bout that typo, it still makes sense!! God Bless~~emilee
 
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