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Voyeur
28 September, 2002
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Just minding my own business
And sitting 'round the house
When I hear a kind of clicking
So I have a look about
What is he doing out there?

Back to my own business
Shuffling things about
When I hear a sort of rustling
It's getting rather loud
What is she doing out there?

Tending to my own business
When I hear music in the street
The sound of voices lifted
And think I'll have a peek
What are they doing out there?

I always mind my business
Just here keeping to myself
Can't help but look and listen
To see what hand life's dealt
What are we doing out here?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Roy (205.188.208.70) -- Wednesday, October 9 2002, 10:11 am

GREAT

makes laugh as I see the new day and ponded the world and "what are you doing out there?" It would be nice to get straight answers.
LightWalker (209.181.17.116) -- Wednesday, October 9 2002, 06:33 pm

Respect

I at was at first going to criticize. But not now. I respect the honesty we both seem to have in our words. Spoken as they are spoken, unabridged, truly great
Dreamer (editor) -- Thursday, October 10 2002, 01:25 am

Lightwalker - I Wonder...

I have to wonder of your criticism and why you changed your mind?
 
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