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Until I Die
Author: Shan

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I'm stumped, I can't breathe and I choke
This can't be, it must be a joke
Trust me, just give me time
I'll explode and bust out rhymes al la mode
I've been ready to blow all this time
Always a steady flow in my mind, I'm ready to go anytime
Sometimes I'm writing rhyming lines with the beat in my mind
And every word be fighting to fit in a line
Other times a mind block takes over the clock in my mind
And sits like a rock on a diamond that wont get to shine
But no, that aint I
I get bold and push over cold shoulders that wont let me by
So move over, cause I wont stop til its over
And it aint over til I get mine,
And now the inks spilling over
The words I spit are coming straight from my eyes
And every feeling I get, you can feel in my lines
If you aint feeling my shit, you must be feeling a lie
My lyrics have pencils down to the grit,
The pen gone and died,
Of what does my life consist?
Writing utencils, paper and I writing rhymes
Util the day I die

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Comments on this poem/writing:

shauntecka wilkins (206.77.0.154) -- Saturday, August 7 2004, 11:01 pm

number 1 fan

stay motivated you only need yourself to stay alive in this industry. thinking of you, number 1 fan!!
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, August 8 2004, 01:48 pm

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Im not feeling your 'sh*t' as you nicely put it.
ben franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, August 8 2004, 01:50 pm

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but i do like your other poems
shauntecka W (206.77.0.156) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 08:41 pm

NUMBER 1 FAN

KEEP YOUR HEAD UP TO THE SKY I PROMISE YOU GET BY BABYGURL BELIEVE ME I KNOW YOUR GOING THROUGH HARD TIMES BUT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CRY JUST KEEP YO HEAD UP HIGH!
NUMBER 1 FAN
 
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