Silent whispers through the night,
Careless victims running blind,
Out of sight and out of mind,
Shadows singing in mid-flight.
Bloody footprints in the snow,
Scared children far from home,
Tearing flesh and braking bones,
Their dark deed is not yet done.
Hell-bound souls begin their trip,
Black rose thorns that nick and rip,
Rotting heartache ensnared in bricks,
Hall of horrors, take you pick.
Anguished lovers miles apart,
Darkness’ grip will crush their heart,
Struck by Cupid’s poisoned darts,
Part of Fortune’s twisted lark.
Laugh and cry and die again,
Good intentions wrapped in chains,
Tears to wash away the rain,
Ingrates forced to feel our pain.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|LinzAy (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 05:37 am|
Nice :) I like the flow :)
|Charmaine (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 07:11 am|
That was a fab poem, and I really liked it a lot.
|Meridian (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 04:17 pm|
The electrofying magnetic force of your poetry, draws me closer.... I love to read your descriptive, deep, profound poetry! Wonderful the way you explain your dark thoughts! I commend you for such Super work!!!
|Angie (18.104.22.168) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 07:18 am|
I also loved this one... it has a good flow and is so descriptive, you can actually see it happening.. love ya!
|Eryemil (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, July 7 2004, 01:17 pm|
This one is very special to me too, even though the things that happen throught the poem sound unrelated they'll do come together to show what I intended.
Thank you for you comments guys!
|Elsiemarie (126.96.36.199) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 02:38 am|
I love your talent linm, you have a great power in you.
|blade (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 11:54 pm|
i agree with Elsiemarie
|William Bill Jones (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, December 5 2012, 11:24 am|
This was one of the best poems I have read on here! Wickedly Entertaining.
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