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Tired Of Waiting
3 July, 2004
Author: Emilee

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I told you that I loved you,
I told you the truth.
You told me that you loved me too,
just needed time to think it through.
So, I waited,
I gave you time.
But you said you needed
to make up your mind.
Make up your mind?
What am I, a toy?
Two things that you wanna buy,
but have to make a choice?
But, still my feelings for you
didn't go away.
To my heart, I had to be true,
I just had to wait.
The more time I spent with you,
I started to realize.
You weren't thinking anything through,
you're just one of those guys.
Who flirts with every girl he sees,
and thinks it's ok.
You even tried to flirt with me,
I just have one thing to say.
I'm done waiting for you,
done trying to make it work.
I wasted a lot of time on you,
you don't derserve to be waited for.
Have my feelings for you
gone away?
No, to tell the truth,
but they will someday.
Not only did you lie to me,
but made me look really dumb.
that wasn't cool can't you see,
what you did was fully wrong.
So I'm done waiting,
farewell bud.
Live life to it's fullest,
try to have some fun.
Remember this,
the last thing I'll say.
You're gonna break a lot more hearts
someday.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Sunday, July 11 2004, 03:12 am

That's right.....move on

Commending you Emilee on moving forward! Saying goodbye, because you're tired of waiting, tired of him hesitating, tired of all the crap!! Nice writing girl!

Smiles,
Meridian
Emilee (12.223.196.102) -- Sunday, July 11 2004, 05:46 am

thank ya

Thanks Meridian! moving on is hard, but this guy was a jerk anyways!! have a great day, God Bless xoxo~emilee
Brittany (71.181.73.213) -- Thursday, February 26 2009, 04:44 pm

good jjob !

okay so i went through the same thiing this poem talks about and i let my jerk of a boy friend go
Mercedes Rose. (98.185.254.42) -- Wednesday, January 20 2010, 02:46 am

Your Poem, Is My Life Storyy

That Was Really Good. It Made Me tear Up.
xoxox Mercedes Rose
carol (208.54.38.219) -- Tuesday, July 30 2013, 10:09 am

I really like ur poem and could understand u

I waited on a guy almost a year nothing made him see how I felt about him so I can't wait any more or my whole life well be wasted by then I have so much else to give so thanks u for ur poem it help me see all this
 
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