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I'd Give Everything For One Touch
9 July, 2004
Author: Shan

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Since you've been gone, I've gone and lost it,
I've been "touched" so to speak
I can't find thoughts that are enough
to show you how much your simple touch means to me
I've lost the simple things that meant so much
Like the way you used to smell, the way you used to breath
I'd give anything to tell you I love you,
And to hear you say that you love me
You were always there to hug me, or been a tissue to me
A warm shoulder to cry on, or a bridge to walk over any length of sea
I give up anything, everything I have, if it only meant
That I could have one last mothers touch placed upon my cheek

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Friday, July 9 2004, 08:09 pm

oh wow

I am truly sorry about the death in your family.... But sincerely, if she were alive, she would probably smile, at the dedication you've posted up here for her....

Nice work Shan! Keep em coming!
Smiles,
Meridian
Terrie* (65.148.211.14) -- Monday, July 12 2004, 10:21 pm

Shan...

this is beautiful..i can feel the pain of your loss thru yor words i can feel the pain in her absence ...Shan she has always been in your heart for as long as your heart still beats she is and remains so much alive there
and you can bring her to life in your dreams...
and in your daily prayers..accept my sincerity on your loss..love your work..
 
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