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Confused
Author: Brett

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I was wrong to think the worst had past
This seems to be a pain that will last
Emotions run deeper than the blood within my veins
Keeping me alive yet still bringing me pain

It's not in me to stop loving you
My heart and mind wont seem to allow me to
You've obviously changed my life in a way
Because you stay in my thoughts, tucked safely away

Why is it so hard to be angry with you?
Your smile can change my whole world if you wanted to
It's hard because I know what you're worth in my mind
However I doubt you have feelings of the same kind

You mean more to me than anything I know
It's just hard to allow my true feelings to show
I would like us somehow to be more than just friends
But I can see in your eye that's where we end

If a friend is what you want, a friend I will be
But I know somewhere inside there's room for "we"...

------- Author's Notes -------

This is just a poem about mixed feelings for a friend. Sometimes I think we would be great as more than that, but I'm uncertain about her feelings towards me.
Unlike me...you should always tell someone how you feel. :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.86.184) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 03:46 am

Brett,

i can so.... pick up on what your saying and the emotions that you are expressing in this..so close to home...thanx for sharin'
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Tuesday, July 13 2004, 04:14 am

great ending

There's always fear, when taking the 1st step.... But, if she reads this poem, I hope she reconsiders her feelings....

Lovely poem, intitled, "Confused"....
Smiles,
Meridian
La_LonLey_DreamEr (68.18.223.234) -- Wednesday, July 14 2004, 02:21 am

Great Poem

your poem was really good! i'm thinking that maybe she has feelings for you but she just as scared n unsure as you r that it'll ruin the freindship but like meridian said when she reads the poem she'll know how strongly u feel towards her n will hopefully reconsider her feelings!!!
well bye for now great poem!!!
-XoXo-
La_LonLey_DreamEr
Demon_99 (68.96.11.191) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 07:14 am

empathy

Don't you hate the feeling of wanting to tell someone of your feeling but have the fear of rejection sulking in the back of your mind :| enough of my babbling, nicely written and good luck with it. ~Demon~
Crush me (141.158.183.223) -- Saturday, July 17 2004, 02:53 am

awesome job!

you poem was awesome! it really touched me, bc i know how you feel.. there is just that little unsure feeling inside, hope for best!
Brett (205.214.208.136) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 08:19 pm

wow!

Wow..i never expected so much people to respond to my poem. I owe an overdue thanks to you all. I completely understand your words and feelings...
It's an unfortunate situation, but it's all a part of life. :)
Thank you guys so much!
Jamie (74.195.209.60) -- Thursday, March 27 2008, 12:14 am

Great Job!!

Hey I kno exactly wat you are talking about...
Great Job
 
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