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Church Of The World
19 July, 2004
Author: Eryemil

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They need to believe,
And believe they do,
In anything that proves,
worthwhile to their cause,

Where are the Gods?
Were is the light,
And while we wait,
The world cries.

Self-righteousness swathed,
In good intentions,
That’s what they are,
And what are we?
What are we?!
We’re nothing.

Yet only the guilty,
Look for amnesty,
Oh, so much guilt,
What are they hiding?!

Ha! I can see their faces,
They know I know,
But no one knows they true path;
I know nothing,
But the way to my own salvation.

Puppets to the puppeteers,
Gods to human mean the same;
How can I be blamed for my actions,
When I do what God intents?

And the Gods hate whomever we hate,
We were created in their image…
But Gods can’t hate?
Who is who’s creation?

Think,
See,
Feel,
Know…

------- Author's Notes -------

^_^ I finally wrote something new, I want anyone who reads this to tell me what they think this poem means. Love for all L.E ^_^

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Elsiemarie (4.234.24.170) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 03:24 am

its great

hey how are you? okay I really like this poem.Hey it might even by my favorite ;-) lol
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 08:03 pm

I may be wrong but...... it's worth a try

Hey Lady E! "Church of The World" caught my eye, I couldn't pass it by.... I guess this poem is saying, even the so-called righteous ones, and sanctified ones are guilty.... Some are guiltier than the average sinner.... Hahaha, I tried Lady E! Take care now! And keep those flamable poems up! LOL! Smiles, Meri
Lady Eryemil (205.188.116.131) -- Tuesday, July 20 2004, 09:13 am

^_^

I get so many wonderful comments, and I read and respond to all of them, I keep mostly to myself. but I think it's about time I go around the site and praise the great poets in here.^_^
Also, yes Meridian, you are right on target, no one has the right to point fingers, you'd be surprised at what you find hidden deep beneath all that righteous hate. Love L.E
 
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