Let Me Take Care
Author: SweetVenom


While you walk past me,
With me looking into your eyes,
I see the hatred in those black balls,
As if it would burn me with a red flare.

I see you humble a sweet tone,
To hide your depressed lone,
I wish I could hold you now,
To tell you,
"Let me take care of you".

The way you enact your part,
Makes me love you more,
As we take this stride of life,
Let me takle care of you,
For the rest of your life.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Ganesh ( -- Tuesday, August 10 2004, 06:07 pm

Bloody blaggard

U r one gud person even though i call u blaggard. We would need to spend time together with a bottle of beer!!!!! In the near future for sure,,,,cheers!!!!
Dereck Solis ( -- Monday, October 18 2004, 03:08 pm

i need u

i need u by my side baby can we ride
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