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The Sweet Moments!
Author: SweetVenom

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As you turn your tiny torso,
In midst of your dreamful sleep,
I canít help watch your movements,
As I sit against the wall,
And relish these sweet moments.

I canít help staring at your calm face,
Which always makes me go trance,
As you throw your hand over to my side,
To feel me, I know the way you care,
Believe me, you and I make a great pair.

With minutes passing to hours,
Without your realization of the tours,
You have taken in your sleep,
While I enjoyed the way your hair dangled,
I love to hold and make it entangled.

As I spend the night looking at you,
I think of those small things we shared,
And those petty things which you cared,
A lot, and the way you made my world,
a heaven, with you as my angel to hold,
All this, doesnít make me stop loving you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.212.109) -- Sunday, August 22 2004, 04:45 pm

S.V, ,love..hard to turn the switch off..

love is an amazing feeling that keeps our hearts alive..your writings brings out the passionate side of mine more..i love your poetry...
Sweetvenom (192.168.48.139) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 03:04 am

Thanks Terrie*

I really feel the same. I put my feelings in words. It is very hard to do. Only a part can be thrown as words and the major part remain in the heart. Thanks for your comments, Terrie. May your love be passionate and keep your heart warm.
Luc (68.77.153.213) -- Saturday, August 28 2004, 08:35 pm

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sweet poem. an emotion that most if not all feel when they are in love. small things that keep people together. keep them moveing foward. love the poem man. pretty awsome. :)
joyce ivy (68.19.189.239) -- Saturday, December 25 2004, 09:48 am

Great SV

love your work here...what love does for us...hummm....your work are warm...and well written...love your work here...merry Christmas...great job...joyce
Sweetvenom (164.164.8.241) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 02:10 pm

Thanks Luc & Joyce

Thanks for your comments on my work. Its these small and less significant things that have a v big effect in life and maintain healthy relationship. In today's world, where break-ups are more and the nature of job which doesn;t allow ppl to meet to make love, these simple languages speak more than words. Thanks for enjoying my work. Love to read yours too! Take care.
Danielle Hamilton (65.189.165.64) -- Saturday, August 13 2005, 05:35 am

Great

It was great. I absolutly loved it
 
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