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Letter To Love
Author: Eryemil

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Dear Love

My name is Loneliness, and my heart belongs to you. Do you want my heart? No one wants my heart, no one but Pain, no one but her. Iíve wanted you for so long, but you ignore me, do you even know Iím here? Do you even know how much I need you? And if you know do you care at all? Desire knows about this, he knows I crave you, he knows, and so does Apathy.

Do you know Happiness? I havenít seen her in so long; I barely know her, sheís special though, if you ever meet her, youíll always be yearning to see her again. My friend Jealousy talks so much about you, youíre his father after all; heís very fond of you, in his own special way. My mother says you could never care for me, she says you are too good for me; and I trust her, after all how could I not trust Shame?

I have to be going now, Oblivion is calling me, heís my best friend; No one can help me forget my troubles like he can.

I just wrote to tell you that Iíll be going now, I really need this vacation away from my Memories, they drive me crazy.

P.S. You can visit me when ever you want, my house is the marble one, the one surrounded by stone angels; the one that says: Here lies a dreamÖ

Good Bye
Hope.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (172.136.239.227) -- Monday, September 6 2004, 04:33 pm

Very creative

Lady E! You've got so much knowledge, so much creativity seeping through your brain! I really love this! Writing to love, and talking about the things that you dislike, such as Shame, and Lonliness, as if they're real people.... That's the creative part! Girl, girl, girl! And you closed it up, by saying "Goodbye Hope!"
Whoa, this is geniune!
Delightful poem girl!
Smiles,
Meri
Lady Eryemil (205.188.116.130) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 06:35 am

^_^

Thanks Meridian, I can always count on you to read my poems, by the way I'm going to let you in on a little secret, I'm a guy. ^_^ Lady Eryemil, is my alter ego, my real name is Limeyre, hence Eryemil which is Limeyre backwards. I use the name L.E so I can write freely about my feelings toward some of the men in my life; there are way to many hateful people out there. It's not that I care about what they think it's just that I want criticism without bias, and besides who needs some moron hindering their creative energies, lol.
Sarah A (82.35.79.145) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 03:07 pm

Wow...

i really enjoyed reading this. i have to agree with Meridian. It's very cleverly done. You'll have to teach me the trick to it one day. Keep writing.
LinzAy (68.49.93.69) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 05:37 pm

......

Great poem :) Love the names;feelings used and how they were used:)
Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 06:30 pm

oh sorry L.E.

You know, if I'd known what gender you really were, I wouldn't call you a girl...lol Sorry, for the misunderstanding. But as always, great poem, Mr. Scholar!

Returning smiles,
Meri
Lady Eryemil (168.221.27.194) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 11:15 am

^_^

It's ok Meridian, if you didn't know it was because I hadn't told many people, I understand, though it was pretty funny the way you kept calling me girl.
Tyni (152.163.100.71) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 10:20 pm

Loving it!

I Love this one, its so cool how u used as characters in your life, i would probably would have never thought of that. Your Very talented, dont let it go to waste. KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!
---Tyni:-)
Haven (70.20.52.12) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 11:21 pm

AWSOME

WOW! Awsome read, very creative. Loved what you did with the names and how you placed them in context...keep up the good work
~Haven
 
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