Letter To Love
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, September 6 2004, 04:33 pm|
Lady E! You've got so much knowledge, so much creativity seeping through your brain! I really love this! Writing to love, and talking about the things that you dislike, such as Shame, and Lonliness, as if they're real people.... That's the creative part! Girl, girl, girl! And you closed it up, by saying "Goodbye Hope!"
Whoa, this is geniune!
Delightful poem girl!
|Lady Eryemil (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 06:35 am|
Thanks Meridian, I can always count on you to read my poems, by the way I'm going to let you in on a little secret, I'm a guy. ^_^ Lady Eryemil, is my alter ego, my real name is Limeyre, hence Eryemil which is Limeyre backwards. I use the name L.E so I can write freely about my feelings toward some of the men in my life; there are way to many hateful people out there. It's not that I care about what they think it's just that I want criticism without bias, and besides who needs some moron hindering their creative energies, lol.
|Sarah A (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 03:07 pm|
i really enjoyed reading this. i have to agree with Meridian. It's very cleverly done. You'll have to teach me the trick to it one day. Keep writing.
|LinzAy (126.96.36.199) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 05:37 pm|
Great poem :) Love the names;feelings used and how they were used:)
|Meridian (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 06:30 pm|
You know, if I'd known what gender you really were, I wouldn't call you a girl...lol Sorry, for the misunderstanding. But as always, great poem, Mr. Scholar!
|Lady Eryemil (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 11:15 am|
It's ok Meridian, if you didn't know it was because I hadn't told many people, I understand, though it was pretty funny the way you kept calling me girl.
|Tyni (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 10:20 pm|
I Love this one, its so cool how u used as characters in your life, i would probably would have never thought of that. Your Very talented, dont let it go to waste. KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!
|Haven (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, March 8 2005, 11:21 pm|
WOW! Awsome read, very creative. Loved what you did with the names and how you placed them in context...keep up the good work
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