So Far Apart, Yet So Close
Author: Brett


We're world's apart, yet mentally still so close
Listening to my heart beat and confronting my woes..
Thinking of all my regrets and mistakes
Realizing what I miss, and waiting for my eyes to awake..
You've got the touch I love so much
But you're so far out of reach, can we keep our trusts?..
My mind is just so confused right now
On the verge of insanity and it's unfixable no matter how..
Thoughts of us, of what we were
How could I allow this seperation to occur?..
Trying to face facts has never been harder to do
What will happen to us? I need some kind of sign from you..
I'm in a sad state without you near
I never knew what we had until it almost dissapeared..
We're still in question, I know that much today
I just didnt realize what a difference our distance makes..
Thinking of you just hurts me more
Please help me to forget, help to heal my sores..


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meri ( -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 06:57 pm

Heart rate

Feels like your heart is rather running, than walking eh? An irregular heartbeat because you miss the one; the rib from your side. LOL! Your words, are above and beyond divine in explaining the way you feel. Don't worry, your Princess Fiona will come to you, sooner than you think! *winks*

Smiley face friend,
XoForeverXo ( -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 03:26 am

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WoW amazing poem! i can relate to every single word there! =( its hard to deal with distance, almost impossible..but somehow, love will find a way. xoxox
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