That look you had
The far away stare in your eyes
A come-hither energy
Pulling me closer
Into who you desired me to become
I followed without refrain
Down the guarded path
Raindrops falling down
Like dogs and cats
Your reason took me
I was alive in the sensation
Fallowed and Inexpliciable
Waiting on the other end of the line
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meri (22.214.171.124) -- Saturday, October 23 2004, 01:00 am|
Thank you for showing me the guarded path, where I can get some nectar too! It was that visionary, that I could almost see, and even taste the fruit! Superb work!
|Willahh (126.96.36.199) -- Saturday, November 13 2004, 06:05 pm|
Thank you for commenting on my work. It inspires me. Your comment makes me wonder if I should start a short story series about The Guarded Path. Perhaps we could write some stories together??
|Meridian (188.8.131.52) -- Saturday, November 13 2004, 06:48 pm|
Hey Willahh! Of course, I'll be willing to write a story with you! When shall we start? I'm so excited!
Take care now!
|Willahh (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, December 12 2004, 08:09 pm|
No time like the present they say!!
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