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Journey Into Sky-blue Eyes
20 December, 2004
Author: Eryemil

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I've been trying to find those sea-clear eyes,
Which I've seen in a dream, and long to know again;
Along the eternal shore trying to meet his gaze,
I've been chasing forever, through forever’s maze.

I watch from the shoreline his receding form,
As he swims away into the ocean's blue;
I alone remain to embrace the jealous storm,
For I could never swim between his love and you.

Wherever he has been I've always gone,
Where he has slept I've dreamed, I've cried,
I've always been one step behind his kiss,
And I may never reach him, though I've tried.

Yet even though the journey is long;
At the end of my path into those blue eyes,
He awaits me there with open arms, I know,
And when he looks at me, I see the sky.

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem is dedicated to Trewin Greenaway:

Take care of yourself angel eyes...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.6.112) -- Monday, December 20 2004, 07:28 am

Great Poem

This is a great poem... Beautiful write!
Terrie* (65.135.87.212) -- Monday, December 20 2004, 07:04 pm

Eryemil, a touch of heaven in those eyes...

and in all you write...sooooo very heart touching and amazing read..(wiping tears away)
i love your work..truely divine..
share some more.....

P.S thanx for such a lovely heartfelt read
J Freedom Long (151.203.70.131) -- Monday, December 20 2004, 07:13 pm

Very Stirring

thanks for a beautiful poem that makes me think of the sky and the sea with colors of a friend and lover with eye auras that pulled me inward....very lovely thoughts and very stirring...mahalo ....Jerry
Jason (210.54.74.45) -- Monday, March 14 2005, 12:31 am

Teary eyed

eryemil, that's so beautiful. you know me. i started to cry! especially after reading the footnote... :)
 
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