Every Day Thoughts On Paper
Too many times a day I sit down and think
What is my life is for? How can I put my words into ink?
I have secrets that run inside for what seems like miles
They eat me alive, as I'm forced to wear a fake smile
The ones I thought I could possible tell
Are now the ones causing me pain from hell..
How can I then try to speak my thoughts?
When the harder I tried, the furthur they got..
I Guess it's just the price I pay,
For being the emtoional person I am today
Little things affect me deeper than anyone I know,
How can I therefore relate, when no-one shares my woes?
I am in no way different to anyone else in this world
But no-one seems to see the need I have to be heard..
Feelings make my eyes water at any sight of a chance
But people have no clue, and don't give me a second glance
These words alone aren't half of what I can share,
Maybe someday I can let it all out, without being scared..
------- Author's Notes -------
It's almost impossible to explain and talk about certain emotions. Especially when there is no-one to share it with..
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Terrie* (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 06:26 am|
to release feelings from your heart..Brett,we all feel ,share and know the deepness of the words you share and write..awesome writing on thoughts
|joyce ivy (184.108.40.206) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 10:46 am|
nothing wrong with being emotional...I can relate well to that....Blog...thats what I do...write everyday...it helps...very emotional write...Love it...joyce
|Brett (220.127.116.11) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 03:55 pm|
Thank you both so much. It's good to know people feel the same way. I'm glad you guys can relate :)
thanks again, Brett
|Meridian (18.104.22.168) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 04:32 pm|
Brett! Doesn't it feel like people won't give you the time of day? I hate the treatment of being left out or of unimportance, you know?
True, great thoughts!
|Brett (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 11:30 pm|
Good to hear from you Meri, a lot of stuff has happened of xmas and I havnt been on this site much, they kept me "busy".
I always appreciate your words
|kisha (126.96.36.199) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 07:27 am|
when I read poetry, i like to feel or somehow relate to what the author is going through, you have a beautiful way of expressing yourself, you write from your heart, it's plesant, keep writing, i know i will keep reading.
|shan (188.8.131.52) -- Tuesday, February 22 2005, 10:48 pm|
incredible.. i can't believe.. i... you.. yeah.. lol see, you have me speachless. i can't even BEGIN to explain how much and how hard i've thought about the same.. no, the EXACT same emotions. this really hit home for me. thank you so much. keep writing, beautifully incredible work
|aimee aka bubz (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, May 9 2005, 10:15 am|
can i copy dis poem so i can show it to my m8!!!it is so beautiful and exactally how i feel yet you put it into words!!! plez-i understand if you dont want to tho.
|Brett (220.127.116.11) -- Tuesday, May 17 2005, 02:45 am|
I can't say enough thanks to you all for your very kind words. I appreciate every post made, and anyone who wishes to use my poems can go ahead without asking. I like writing so that others can share my views and use them whenver they want.
thanks again to you all. I really REALLY appreciate everything you guys say!
|barb (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, May 17 2005, 03:13 am|
You have a heart thoughts and feelings If you want to share them, here is a good place. Whenever I need a good feeling I write my thoughts on paper and submit it here.. keep writing down your feelings.
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