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Dark Hole
12 January, 2005
Author: Shaz

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I’m deep down in a dark, dark hole
I’m trying to get out
I call to many people
But they can’t hear me shout

Perhaps my call is silent
Perhaps it’s not so clear
Maybe they are far away
Maybe they cannot hear

Maybe I don’t want them to
Maybe I’m afraid
Maybe I should stay down here
My life is what I made

I sit here softly crying
I sit alone and weep
I like to live in misery
I cry myself to sleep

I have such a mixed up mind
I try and try to fix
But the more I sort things out
The more things that I mix

I feel alone inside this hole
I feel so insecure
I feel I want to run away
But feel that is no cure

I wish I understood myself
This torment I could free
If anyone should know that
I guess it should be me

I’m deep down in the dark, dark hole
I’m trying to get out
The hole is in my crazy head
Of that I have no doubt

------- Author's Notes -------

50 Days Sobriety

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (4.27.179.197) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 08:36 am

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I love the rythym in your poems :) Another good one :)
joyce ivy (70.144.199.12) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 09:11 am

Shaz

now you sound like me...I feel the same way sometimes...thats where my dark poetry comes from....mixed up minds...they do that to ya....very good...and cong..on the sobriety....great...need a friend...i'm always here...joyce
RubyD (213.249.154.101) -- Thursday, January 13 2005, 01:59 pm

Thanks

Excellent writing Shaz, I liked it.
 
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