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64 Days
25 January, 2005
Author: Shaz

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I think the weathers changing
I think its getting colder
Maybe it’s just me
Maybe I'm getting older

The sun is rising higher
The wind seems somehow fresh
The clouds are much, much whiter
I’m getting goose bumps on my flesh

Maybe I’m getting feeling back
As my mind is calmer too
Maybe it’s a mental change
That I’ve been going through

I see things much clearer now
I can see trouble going
I feel my wounds are healing
I’m stitching up and sewing

My head belongs to me again
My brain is somewhat mine
I’m laughing a lot more
I’m actually feeling fine

I see light at the end of the tunnel
A tunnel I couldn’t find
I’m now walking through it
I think I've found my mind

It’s no longer tortured by pain
It doesn't seem to think
Of all the troubled thoughts
I don’t even need a drink

So yes today is a good day
I don’t feel any sorrow
I'll sleep a peaceful sleep
I can’t wait until tomorrow

------- Author's Notes -------

well it looks like I could be coming out of the darkness. Hope this feeling stays.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.118.69) -- Tuesday, January 25 2005, 03:16 am

good

this was truly a good poem to me. Keep up the goot work ~Britney~
Terrie* (65.148.208.38) -- Sunday, January 30 2005, 04:17 pm

Shaz, this was writen w/so much heart....

so proud of you Shaz ...and you should be too!!!...i admire your dedication it takes strength to win the battle you won..a true inspiration, you've been given a mission to be the testimony to many and guide them through..as he too lead you...Thanx 4 sharin' your heart...we felt it's sincerity...Terrie*
joyce ivy (70.144.199.126) -- Sunday, January 30 2005, 06:39 pm

Shaz

the feeling will stay...just try to keep in the good spirits...very proud of you...joyce
anonymous (64.12.116.201) -- Monday, March 31 2008, 04:41 am

Shaz

this is beautiful..
 
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