Strangled by Shaz

Strangled with guilt
Adored with falsity’s
Manipulated with kind
What’s wrong with this picture?

Storybooked with tales
Filled up with bitterness
Taught how to hate
What’s wrong with this picture?

Topped up constantly with anger
Refilled with choking
Taught how to hide
What’s wrong with this picture?

Snapped with addiction
Photographed with misery
Manipulated and twisted
What’s wrong with this picture?

Fed with lies
Replenished with secrets
Fragmented with life
I’m in this picture

Terrie* (65.150.170.71) -- Sunday, February 6 2005, 07:50 pm

Shaz, powerful read...
your writing is very impressive and very upfront..i like that..shows class ...shows a brave heart...shows a soul full of life and love...shows a woman winning the battle ...shows a mother filled w/glory...shows a friend w/compassion...excellent piece...proud of you proud of your words...Terrie*

Britney (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 03:01 pm

Great
This was a very well written poem I enjoyed reading this poem!
~Britney~

Megan (205.188.116.74) -- Tuesday, February 8 2005, 01:50 am

Strangled
This poem says so much. I love it.

joyce ivy (70.144.199.89) -- Wednesday, February 9 2005, 10:32 am

Shaz
I have to agree totally with Terrie...you are very brave...wish I was sometimes...for in your picture...I also see so much of me...I am very proud of you...keep fighting...and keep winning...
It shows your true winner...with a love for life...
Your friend...
joyce

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