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I Wish I Had Been Near You
Author: SweetVenom

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I wish I had been near you,
To take your hands in mine,
I like comforting you,
and make you talk your mind,

I wish I had been near,
To know your hidden ambitions,
silly, they may be,
But it is something great to hear.

I wish I had been close to you,
To cuddle you very close to me,
and share the warmth,
that I always had for you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Britney (67.136.81.200) -- Sunday, February 20 2005, 03:27 am

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I loved this poem too. Great job! ~Britney~
Sweetvenom (61.95.194.24) -- Sunday, February 20 2005, 09:24 am

Thanx Britney!

Thanx dear. This is wat I feel but I don't have anyone to share it with. So I put my imaginary love on poems.
I never thought they would sound so good until you guys post your comments(happens for everybody. I m not an exception).
Britney (67.136.100.9) -- Sunday, February 20 2005, 03:56 pm

yeah...

Writing poems kinda hard when you write something and you can't share. You are a great exception of poetry you keep writing always I would always love to read your poetry its so great! ~Britney~
Terrie* (65.148.214.92) -- Sunday, February 20 2005, 06:09 pm

Wish you were too...

SweetVen,your words are always expressed so warmly,you capture my heart in all your hearts creations.. our thoughts put us closer to that special someone whom awaits patiently as we do..for Real Love/Passion ...time/patience will place them within our lifes...Good Luck...Terrie*
Blue (202.56.199.243) -- Thursday, July 28 2005, 09:27 am

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Amazing, This is exactly the same feeling i had for her. only thing, I didn't have such perfect words. Indeed, very warm poetry. gud luck.
 
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