Caught In Her Web
Infatuation cobwebs spiraling on my brain,
‘She’ the spider taking control over me,
Spinning her charm all over my mind,
She takes total charge causing me pain.
Intellectual webs melting away by the fire,
That she sprays from her hot & powerful eyes,
I walk in this world like a dumb man,
Always dreaming about her in my lair.
Ingenuous web of axons losing power,
All I could see is her black rolling hair,
As I feel a slight tremor in my head,
Her askance look makes me go mad.
Incredible webbing of the hand over the strings,
That was the first time when I saw the fairy descend,
I met her after months to know her name,
Meeting her made me feel, I have great fame.
Incremental building of the love web,
Was spun in my heart like a thick mass,
I focus each spin of plan with great care,
All I want is to be her pair.
Incessant rains and web of dark clouds,
Influence the feeling of love,
I cry over my bed, being cow,
I think of ways to speak to her of my love.
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Ashvita (126.96.36.199) -- Wednesday, March 30 2005, 09:27 am|
who is 'She' n being cow, means wat??
|Terrie* (188.8.131.52) -- Wednesday, March 30 2005, 08:45 pm|
Sweetvenom, this is a very interestin' & captivatin' read...
ya know...love can take a great hold of our hearts...through your words, i can feel your happiness within your submission of havin' someone do this for you...great job to your lady...and to you for feelin' the love she shares with you...AWESOME feelin' huh???....Terrie*
|Vishnu (192.168.48.137) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 07:49 am|
As always, your best comes out when you write about the other gender. Keep wiritng!
|Tharaka_s2000 (192.168.200.157) -- Saturday, April 9 2005, 04:37 am|
hey its good do it countinusly.........
Your Friend Tharaka
|Thushi Abi (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, April 14 2005, 05:40 pm|
it's a wonderful poem. well done..
|Alexandria (eiriyuki) (220.127.116.11) -- Saturday, April 30 2005, 04:09 am|
I decided to check out the website and your poems and i'm in awe cause i'm just a begining poet,so I'm really not good yet.Your poems blow me away and I'm about to read more of them.
|Sudeshna (18.104.22.168) -- Friday, November 10 2006, 04:31 pm|
Good one Buddy. It rightly brings the nostalgia in falling into love. Nothing like it. Lucky you to have gone through it.
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