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Waiting With My Heart Out
Author: SweetVenom

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I took my heart out,
To let it sprout,
My body decayed with hatred,
While I searched for love.

Awaiting a distant call,
From a lost pal,
I gazed at the orange skies,
Hoping to hear her voice, over the skies.

As evening was drawing to a close,
With oxygen increasing around,
I saw the chirping birds returning home,
And my heart was beaming ‘red’ with blood.

With a lump in my stomach,
I returned home along the path,
Filled with muck,
I tumbled and fell in the dark.

As the morning dew woke me up,
I was surrounded with fragrant flowers,
Realizing the candles that glowed around,
I felt my body numb and without life.

Still waiting for her to come to me,
I felt my arms stretched wide,
Towards the open skies,
I could feel her pull me up, close to her.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.135.87.55) -- Tuesday, April 12 2005, 05:12 pm

this pulled on my heart all the way up too

SweeeeeeetVenom, i feel the passion of your passion....truely enjoyable and impressive read....Terrie*
Sweetvenom (203.91.193.4) -- Wednesday, April 13 2005, 11:53 am

Thanks Terrie

Hi, Terrie. I am really happy to know that it pulled your heart :).Thanks for ur comments. You were always there to read, imagine and pen down comments on my work. Once again, thanks a lot.
Regards, Sweetvenom
Chandrika (203.91.193.4) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 12:10 pm

really good....

very sensational way of expressing ur thoughts....u r really gifted to express urself emotionally and ornamentally...continue ur poems...best wishes
Angel in Tears (81.129.17.72) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 05:55 pm

SweetVenom..

The spring has come to your heart has it?:p May the feeling of spring be in your heart always!Beautiful poem!An Angel in Tears
Thushi (84.72.192.153) -- Monday, April 18 2005, 05:59 pm

R u in love with someone?

HI Sweetvenom..... what a nice poem... good luck for ur love..

ur friend
Thushi
raapi (70.112.138.4) -- Saturday, May 7 2005, 06:01 pm

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hey.. That was nice.. Hope U reach out far to ur lover :)
Sandra (80.250.38.210) -- Monday, May 30 2005, 06:48 pm

To Friends and Loved ones

Is good to good to be urs friends and loved one
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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